Tuesday, July 17, 2007

D#8, HW#1 - Peer Reviewx2

I reviewed Jessica's and Jay's WP#2's.

I had concerns with Jessica's WP#2 opening and closing paragraphs. I suggested that there is a third perception or belief that was not represented in the research.

Jay's paper was set up well except he forgot to list the dates when he retrieved the information.

1 comment:

Jessica said...

thank you for your suggestion. I had thought of that perspective, but felt it was almost implied. I will make note to mention it specifically. Thanks.