I reviewed Jessica's and Jay's WP#2's.
I had concerns with Jessica's WP#2 opening and closing paragraphs. I suggested that there is a third perception or belief that was not represented in the research.
Jay's paper was set up well except he forgot to list the dates when he retrieved the information.
Tuesday, July 17, 2007
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thank you for your suggestion. I had thought of that perspective, but felt it was almost implied. I will make note to mention it specifically. Thanks.
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