- Revising takes a tremendous amount of work through thought, memory and referencing. The main thing I tried to accomplish was revising without losing the meaning of my paper. I’m not sure if I did this.
- Organizing was not as difficult with this deadline as the deadline outline was pretty self-explanatory. The only thing I’d recommend in the future is to not put so many instructions in one paragraph. I had to copy the paragraphs then separate each sentence to ensure I was following the instructions correctly. This was time consuming, but I’m glad I did it.
- I incorporated the techniques I learned from the previous deadline to assist with my revising.
- I did not do any further research for outside sources on this deadline.
- I need to further work on integrating sources properly when I summarize, paraphrase or quote sources to develop and support my ideas.
- The feedback I received on this peer review was very helpful. Especially regarding my thesis statement.
- I think I’m writing well. I have little else to indicate otherwise.
- My blog is still killing me…but I am persevering. I haven't really needed to use other technologies for this deadline other than a word processor and I use the spelling/grammar check feature prior to each save. I use my gmail account everyday and I love the extra tools that come with it, like the homepage I customized with beach items.
Jay’s Blog – D#10, HW#8
Shawn’s Blog – D#12, HW#5
Jessica’s Blog – D#10, HW#7
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