Friday, July 27, 2007

D#11, HW#4 - Peer Review Reflection

Peer Review Reflection –

I peer reviewed Alexis’s & Ryan’s WP#3 drafts. I learned to double check APA style to ensure I’m citing sources correctly. After reviewing the comments on my draft by Jessica and Jason, I understood that I needed more documentation to back my argument. Also, thank you to Jessica for showing how the little word ‘of’ can be so big in a sentence. Thank you to Jason for pointing out my thesis was too strong in the opening paragraph. I moved it to the conclusion paragraph as suggested and my draft reads better now. No comments surprised me, and as always are very appreciated. Turnitin.com showed a two percent match, however, I was unable to review these matches as they were related to student papers.

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